Excitement Eve

Week 70 of 100 word count challenge

Prompt- Twas the night before christmas

Twas the night before christmas and jess is tucked up in bed
Waiting for santa and his filled sledge
Fighting off sleep to see if her stocking had been filled up to the brim
With candy, toys and chocolate all from him

She wondered if he liked her cookies and milk she left out for st nick
Her daddy said a mince pie would also do the trick
Sound of bells and a hohoho filled the air
Jess squealed and hugged her teddybear
Snow began to fall as she dashed to the window
As she also saw Rudolph and others in tow

Merry christmas to one and all


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5 Responses to Excitement Eve

  1. Sally-Jayne says:

    You captured the feeling of excitement really well.

  2. That’s a happy child! Nice job.

  3. Mayumi-H says:

    What a sweet account of Jess’s first Christmas eve, Jenny! 😀 I love the details about fighting off sleep and hugging her teddy (and how her daddy suggests a mince pie would be just as nice as cookies! 😉 ).

    Well done!

  4. Sounds like a wonderful Christmas. I’m enjoying reading all the submissions. I hope when my link gets up, you’ll stop be and say hi.


  5. Love it you captured the excitement really well x

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