Week 66 of the 100 word count challenge – http://jfb57.wordpress.com/2012/11/12/100-word-challenge-for-grown-ups-week66/
Prompt- the silence was deafening
The silence was deafening, her head started to spin and she could feel the tears starting to form- she had no control over her body as she started to shake. How did she end up in this situation? She couldn’t look at him in fear of what she would do and all the trust shattered like the glass that fell out of her hand. She needed air as the large hall somehow turned tiny in an instant and started to suffocate her. She said her excuses and walked as fast as she could away from it all without looking back.
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This could be a scene in my book where Ruby finds out about Nathan and Lisa 🙂
Such powerful emotion! I’ve only read the first bits of your book, but I think this would be a great little moment in your story – it does a great job of conveying that shock and heartbreak. Well done, Jenny! 😀
Many thanks 🙂 i think i will include it as already thinking of what will happen next in the scene :0 x
Would love to know what has just happened to make her feel this way.