Revenge

100 word count for grown ups- Week 57

http://jfb57.wordpress.com/2012/09/10/100-word-challenge-for-grown-ups-week-57/

Prompt- returning to the routine….

Returning to the routine of everyday life is not on Tara Max’s mind- far from it. Oh no she vowed revenge and that’s what she is going to do. Life for her is not the same- being sent to prison for a crime you didnt commit changes you. She thought she knew her friends but they turned against her- now they will regret that.

“Here are your belongings Miss” said the security officer

A polite nod and she grabbed her bag. Daylight drawing her to freedom and fresh air making her feel alive again.

For a brief moment she shut her eyes and smiled.

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14 Responses to Revenge

  1. lorrainefort says:

    There is a greater story here! I would love to hear ‘the rest of the story!’ 🙂 nicely done.

  2. Sally says:

    Oooh I wonder what she was falsely accused of? Who is she going to get her revenge on?

  3. judithatwood says:

    This entry makes me want to know more!! Great 100WCGU!

  4. Would love to hear more of this story 🙂 x

  5. I’m scared but intrigued. Revenge is never really the answer . . . but I guess it is the only one sometimes.

  6. thankyou all so much! she might return soon for some answers 😛

  7. I am intrigued…nice interpretation.

  8. CoffeeCurls says:

    Ooooh I wonder what the little minx did next?!

  9. Paul says:

    Very entertaining. Needs a little help with Verb tense and pronouns but, I love “daylight drawing her to freedom.” A bit of self promotion now. Mine’s at http://photovignettes.wordpress.com/2012/09/13/the-routine/.

  10. ooh love it, I want to know more. x

  11. Clever approach to acknowledge the prompt by saying that your character ISN’T going to return to routine! And you give us a nicely written quick sketch of your character’s situation, plans, and reasons. Somehow I don’t think her smile comes from enjoying the freedom and fresh air, so much as looking forward to destruction. In my mind’s eye, it’s not a nice smile at all.

  12. I agree with Paul’s comment and verb tense and pronouns but other than that – what a great lead into a longer story! Would love to find out more about Tara ans what she’s planning to do next…

  13. Agreed to the sense that there is much more to this than 100 words can tell. I would be quite interested to see this one continue.
    Great work!

  14. i did write this in 10mins so soz if few mistakes- had a moment of me time before jess kicked off 😛

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