Time

I’m linking up with JB47’s 100 Word Challenge.Week 39 – 100 word challenge prompt- I’m exhausted, Shut the door behind you……

“I’m exhausted, shut the door behind you” the old lady asked her grandaughter as she was about to receive her cup of tea

“Keeps the warmth in” she added as she put the knitting to one side. The grandaughter went back and shut the door, noticing her nan seemed more fraile as the weeks wore on- that time has taken its toll on her as she looked into her eyes on the way back to the sofa. She remembered when she started to look after her and felt sadness.

“Is their anything else Nan”

“No dear im good”

With that she said what was her last goodbye.

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9 Responses to Time

  1. Jen Dawe says:

    From your novel? I’m intrigued.

    • ooh no this is a seperate thing- its a weekly word challenge where every week someone gives us a prompt and we have to use it in 107 words ๐Ÿ™‚

      i will put up my book chapters on here too so watch this space ๐Ÿ˜›

      x

    • jfb57 says:

      It is a weekly creative writing challenge where you get a prompt of some sort and can add 100 words to produce a piece of writing. Here is the latest one – do have a go! http://t.co/1Mvxq5mG

  2. jfb57 says:

    Oh this is so sad. I love the ‘eyes ‘ bit particularly. Thank you for joining the 100WCGU. See you next time!

  3. This was very sad, am intrigued by your ‘chapters’ …will look out for them.

  4. DancingInTheRain says:

    Sad…. and she was so uncomplaining. Nicely portrayed.

  5. Gilly Gee says:

    Oh this is very moving, she puts her knitting aside to have a final cup of tea ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

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